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His OC Tomoko I got sooooooo frustrated at this because i saved on my usb than when i put it on my laptop it didnt open, so i tried back on the computer and it wouldnt open either. So... i had to do it again. And than it took me half an hour to submit it because my computer was being an arse. Comments
 looks great! I love the shirt
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they are wow  just so bold and stand out so much they are great!  and so is the rest of the pic! :] -- :insert good signature here: ◕ ‿ ◕ If you know and have performed the Yevon prayer (also known as the sign for victory in old Zanarkand blitzball) copy and paste this in your signature. thanks ^^ but i still have a long way til i get the eyes perfect
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I do have to say that I feel the proportions are pretty off, though. His shoulders should come out a big further from the sides of his head, the arms should be a tad shorter, the torso a bit wider (which would also make the legs a bit wider), and the neck should be a bit wider.
As for the sides of the body, if you take a look at a normal person's body, it's not a perfectly straight line. I would suggest using references to help you out.
Adding wrinkles to fabrics can make them more believable, and it can also add life to your drawings.
The jaw-line is a little odd. You should have the sides of the chin down quite a bit lower to wear you can see them. I'm not sure if I can explian this very well, so if you don't understand, you can always reply and I'll find an image that I can draw on to show you what I mean.
Also, the tips of the hair. When taking a look at real hair, you should notice that it doesn't form to a point perfectly. Clumps of hair are usually more curved, and if pointy, it's usually because they have lots of layers. I would suggest looking either online or in magazines at different types of hair to get that down.
The lines for the collar-bone are up a bit too high. Given the height of the collar of the shirt, you shouldn't be able to see the lines/impression of the collar-bone at all.
I hope this helped!
I see a lot of potential!
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